Pretty Crazy

Hello Stevie! I'm going to try something new and write what I'm thinking as I read. Here goes! The crackling static filled the room, waking the girl from a deep ...

I really like this! It's so simple and yet you use big words, which even it out. Your rhyming patterns (is that the right term?) are excellent and the flow ...

Hello Bhayden! First of all I must say this is amazing. The concept and moral to this is. . . wow. I love how you made it fantasy-like and imaginative. ...

Wow! You had me hooked from the first sentence. Excellent attention-grabber. Now I'm curious and dying to know what happened and why. There's nothing to nit-pick, nor is there anything ...

Oh wow, that was genius! I thought it was another whiner about relationships, but then at the end. . . Well, there's no need to say why it's so funny. ...

Hey, I'm back again! Well at least things are finally moving along. Blade seems like a really cool character. I can't wait to see what happens later on into the ...

Hello bibi, I'm going to attempt and review this for you. :) Through a street with silver lights, I walk , Down this path, I walk . You use walk ...

Um, okay. This is all slashed out. Did you hit the button by accident or what? Nevertheless, I'm no wimp. I'll review this for ya. :) Ugh, it's a huge ...

Hello Pink, I agree with you that this chapter isn't as good as the others. It seems a little forced. A lot of the sentences could be rephrased to make ...

The pace of this is quite fast, and yet it tells the story really well. It has a feel of urgency to it, which suits it by the way. It's ...

This is very beautiful. The words you used set the scene wonderfully. I could easily picture the images as I read. The ending was sudden, but I liked it. It ...

Hi, It's me, here to review your story. Well, there aren't any nitpicks for me to do. So I'll just say that this is well-written. Everything that happens you describe ...

Ugh, I don't like vampires. Yet I'm fascinated by this. Your writing is like a trap. I can't stop reading it (that's a compliment by the way). Maybe it's because ...

Hello, I spotted a few spelling errors and typos: I heard a knock at my door and I opened it even though it was aftr curfew. Forgot the "E" in ...

Hello, I don't get why you don't have more reviews. This story is quite interesting :) Nitpick time! Michael Turner, father of teenager Maxine Turner, has been found, dead, in ...